Pretty good, made me chuckle.
I loved the canibal one, stealing his heart!
Oh and props for the portal reference XD
Visually, Waterlollies is, as usual with your work, amazing.
The sounds are definatly vastly better than previous Brackenwood installments
The hype about Waterlollies was also definatly much bigger.
But unfortunatly It's just not as interesting as Littlefoot or The Yuyu. After all the delays and comments you made about parts A and B being releaseable without C I expected an epic tale with a thick plot and unexpected twists.... but they just weren't there. It felt short, very short. We see barely any of the loveable action that makes Bitey such an enjoyable character, having Bitey on a low is OK, but a whole animation where he's on a low is dissapointing.
Don't get me wrong, you are THE best flash artist there is, but your plots need work. Hopefully this is an issue that will be resolved with the Brackenwood movie (If it goes to cinema I will go 100 times, and If it goes stright to DVD I'll buy 20 copies)
Keep up the amazing work!
Thanks for the review and I agree with you on the pacing of this one. In this story the challenge was to negate Bitey's advantage (speed) yet quicken the pace for the climax. As we can see, the two kinda cancel each other out and in hindsight (from my hospital bed) I see that I could have made a much stronger ending.
I'll take this movie as a lesson learned in story writing.. the next one will be an improvement, storywise :)
This is good, if you could get one of the HL2 tracks that has a fast beat then you could do a proper HL2 madness and it would go down well.
how long did this take? with only a little bit more effort+ a lot more time you could make a propper one.
go for it! I'm behind you on this one
looks good so far
what you've got looks great
I thought I'd post a comment before it gets blammed. you shouldnt really put tests up here, thats what alphas are for but I won't hold it agaisnt you, this looks like its going to be very good. as long as the tutorials themselves are good you're on to a winner.
Good luck with the real thing
Thanks, if you want, add me, or sirrichard to favourites, so you will be notified when the final version comes out (if you want, you can delete us after if you don't want to be notified of any more of our submissions )
this is prety simple stuff, not even nice presentation, add a mute button, for tutorials a mute button is a must have.
Isn't this just called stealing? if you want a movie to play on your own pc instead of the internet you sould contact the author, if he/she agrees to let you have one thats up to them, if they dont, dont steal it, dont become like eric bauman. Down with ebaum!
pretty informative though
this has been submitted before
why has this been re-submitted? i saw this on here only a few weeks ago and i cant see any change since then?
very moving, this is simply great. it touched me.
this is really great, it just works. its really great
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. Thanks.
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